...and it's not clear that this is your life, yet. It looks a lot like the packaged birthday party/family projects that folks do to commemorate their loved ones but there really is no plot, or backstory, or details to suggest a connection to the filmmaker (you).
These elements of storytelling need to be further explore in your independent project.
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Something to think about regarding narrative:
-character – Who’s the story about?
...and it's not clear that this is your life, yet. It looks a lot like the packaged birthday party/family projects that folks do to commemorate their loved ones but there really is no plot, or backstory, or details to suggest a connection to the filmmaker (you).
These elements of storytelling need to be further explore in your independent project.
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